9 Jul 2018

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Please correct it about ''my hometown.''

I'm from KOBE in Japan.
Kobe locates next to Osaka and is known as a port town. We have sea and also mountains. The view from mountains are so beautiful. Moreover, the night view is called '' one hundred thousand doller's night view''

the city is famous for sweet such as cake, chocolate. Especially, raw chocolate is tasty. the tast is smooth and melt quickly as soon as you put it into your mouth.
There are modern architectures where foreigners lived in old time.
the city is less crowd than Osaka. you can spend a lot of time relaxing .

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