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13 Aug 2018

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Could you help me for my English composition?
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Today was a lovely day. I ordered a cup of coffee and sat near the door. While I was reading the newspaper, there was a beautiful woman entering the coffee shop. She had a long blonde hair and pretty blue eyes. So attractive was the woman that I couldn’t take my eyes off her. I plucked up my courage and talked to her. After introducing myself, I asked if I could buy her a coffee. At the same time, a strong man came in and gave me a punch. I fall down and run away quickly. Then I received a message from a ugly girl, Amy, who was crazy about me before. It said,”You deserve it!”. Finally, I realized everything : It was a wicked plan.
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Thanks for your reading. Plz write down your opinions and help me improve my English problems. 🙏❤️

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