Please, may you correct this short text?
In this age most of the peasants became employed in factories or either migrated to America.
The middle class divided into sub-strata and the upper-middle class became the most powerful as Thackeray testified in his works.
A lot of children became employees in factories as in Charles Dickens’ social novel Oliver Twist, (which deals with poverty, domestic violence, child labor and the recruitment of children as criminals) or Mark Twain’s The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (which is about a boy growing up along the Mississippi River in pre-civil war America) and Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (which is a sequel of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer and deals with themes like racism).
In Walden or The Life in the Wood, Thoreau described his experience of solitude which used to be felt by 19th-century men who believed in progress but missed nature.

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Please, may you correct this short text?
In this age most of the peasants became employed in factories or either migrated to America. 
The middle class divided into sub-strata and the upper-middle class became the most powerful as Thackeray testified in his works.
A lot of children became employees in factories as in Charles Dickens’ social novel Oliver Twist, (which deals with poverty, domestic violence, child labor and the recruitment of children as criminals) or Mark Twain’s The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (which is about a boy growing up along the Mississippi River in pre-civil war America) and Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (which is a sequel of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer and deals with themes like racism). 
In Walden or The Life in the Wood, Thoreau described his experience of solitude which used to be felt by 19th-century men who believed in progress but missed nature.

cycyma0 · Answer

A lot of children became employees in factories like in Charles Dickens’ social novel

cycyma0 · Answer

This is the only correction I saw from your short text. Its actually well written 😄

amishamango · Answer

In this age, most of the peasants WERE employed in factories or migrated to America. 
The middle class WAS divided into sub-strata, and the upper-middle class became the most powerful as Thackeray testified in his works.
A lot of children became employees in factories as seen in Charles Dickens’ social novel Oliver Twist, (which deals with poverty, domestic violence, child labor and the recruitment of children as criminals), Mark Twain’s The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (which is about a boy growing up along the Mississippi River in pre-civil war America) and Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (which is a sequel of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer and deals with themes like racism). 
In Walden or The Life in the Wood, Thoreau described his experience of solitude which WAS felt by 19th-century men who believed in progress but missed nature.

amishamango · Answer

^^ thats how i would write it !!