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I wrote about my family. if there are mistakes, please let me know.
there are 7 people in my family, fathere, mother, grandma, elderly brother, two elderly sisters and me.
my father works for online shop and my mam, grandma, second sister helps his business.
my brother is a prefecture staff.
my first sister is married and live in Yamanashi.
and l have a dog named Koro.
I'm close to my family and we often eat out together.
please send your voise massage to check pronunciation, if you can.
I wrote about my family. if there are mistakes, please let me know.
there are 7 people in my family, fathere, mother, grandma, elderly brother, two elderly sisters and me.
my father works for online shop and my mam, grandma, second sister helps his business.
my brother is a prefecture staff.
my first sister is married and live in Yamanashi.
and l have a dog named Koro.
I'm close to my family and we often eat out together.
please send your voise massage to check pronunciation, if you can.
there are 7 people in my family, fathere, mother, grandma, elderly brother, two elderly sisters and me.
my father works for online shop and my mam, grandma, second sister helps his business.
my brother is a prefecture staff.
my first sister is married and live in Yamanashi.
and l have a dog named Koro.
I'm close to my family and we often eat out together.
please send your voise massage to check pronunciation, if you can.
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if you want you could say all of this. then i could check your pronunciation if you want to.
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There are seven people in my family, my father, mother, grandma, older brother, two older sisters and me. My father works for an online shop and my mom, grandma and second sister help with his business. My brother is a prefecture staff member. My first sister is married and lives in Yamanashi. I have a dog named Koro. I'm close to my family and we often eat out together.
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