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Jim goes to college abroad. He got accepted on a scholarship, which means that not only does he get his education for free, but he also gets paid every month.
There's a contest for an even higher allowance now. Students have to submit a list of their academic achievements online along with the proofs backing it up. The winners will then be selected. There will be a total of ninety winners.
The priority goes to seniors. However, there is still a chance for the other students to win. Does this sound natural?
Jim goes to college abroad. He got accepted on a scholarship, which means that not only does he get his education for free, but he also gets paid every month.
There's a contest for an even higher allowance now. Students have to submit a list of their academic achievements online along with the proofs backing it up. The winners will then be selected. There will be a total of ninety winners.
The priority goes to seniors. However, there is still a chance for the other students to win. Does this sound natural?
There's a contest for an even higher allowance now. Students have to submit a list of their academic achievements online along with the proofs backing it up. The winners will then be selected. There will be a total of ninety winners.
The priority goes to seniors. However, there is still a chance for the other students to win. Does this sound natural?
Could you please also make it sound a little more formal?
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21 Sep 2016
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Jim attends college abroad. He was accepted on a scholarship, which means not only does he receive free tuition, but he also is paid a stipend every month.
There's a contest for an even higher allowance now. Students must submit a list of their academic achievements online along with verifiable proof. There will be a total of ninety winners.
The priority goes to seniors; however, there is still a chance for the other students to win.
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Jim attends college abroad. He was accepted on a scholarship, which means not only does he receive free tuition, but he also is paid a stipend every month.
There's a contest for an even higher allowance now. Students must submit a list of their academic achievements online along with verifiable proof. There will be a total of ninety winners.
The priority goes to seniors; however, there is still a chance for the other students to win.
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