- Japanese
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English (UK)
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German
Hiroshima,my hometown,is a one of cities of piace.I have been leaned how did Nuclear Power bomb felled on Hiroshima impact on many people.I think people in Hiroshima have to know not only what have happened in our country 71 years ago but also what our country have done as a perpetrator.
Thank you for always teaching English for me!╰(*´︶`*)╯ Does this sound natural?
Thank you for always teaching English for me!╰(*´︶`*)╯ Does this sound natural?
- English (UK)
A little unnatural
I'm not sure how to correct the first sentence, but the rest I would say:
I have learnt how the nuclear power bomb impacted many people in Hiroshima. I think people in Hiroshima have to know not only what happened in our country 71 years ago, but also what our country has done as a perpetrator.
Thank you for always teaching me English!
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- English (UK)
A little unnatural
I'm not sure how to correct the first sentence, but the rest I would say:
I have learnt how the nuclear power bomb impacted many people in Hiroshima. I think people in Hiroshima have to know not only what happened in our country 71 years ago, but also what our country has done as a perpetrator.
Thank you for always teaching me English!
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- English (UK)
- English (US)
A little unnatural
Hiroshima, my hometown, is one of the cities of peace. I have been taught how a Nuclear bomb fell on Hiroshima and the impact on many people. I think people in Hiroshima have to know not only what happened in our country 71 years ago but also what our country has done as a perpetrator.
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