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13 Nov 2014
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Why am I having trouble with my eyes? Why my eyes are always reddened and swollen? Honestly,I am tired with my regular minor health problems that is putting my life in trouble. I most have to consider some home remedies that will help to cure this problem. Does this sound natural?
Why am I having trouble with my eyes? Why my eyes are always reddened and swollen? Honestly,I am tired with my regular minor health problems that is putting my life in trouble. I most have to consider some home remedies that will help to cure this problem. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
Good! Here are a few things you might change though: first, I would change "reddened" to just "red". Second, "regular minor health problems" sounds kind of weird, so I might change that to "reoccurring minor health problems". "I most have to consider" would probably be something like "I at least have to consider". Other than those, it sounds pretty good!
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A little unnatural
Oh yeah, you would change "Why my eyes are" to "Why are my eyes". Forgot that one.

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