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I met her when I studied in the secondary school began. At that time, I felt her was so gentle and quiet. I thought her was very special and different from other girls. I often pretended to borrow stationary with her. However, I didn't bare my heart with her at the last. Does this sound natural?
I met her when I studied in the secondary school began. At that time, I felt her was so gentle and quiet. I thought her was very special and different from other girls. I often pretended to borrow stationary with her. However, I didn't bare my heart with her at the last. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
I met her when I began secondary school. She was very gentle and quiet. I though she was very special and different from other girls. I often pretended to forget my stationary and borrowed from her. However, I didn't tell her my true feelings in the end.
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