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10 Jul 2015
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When I've held breath and hid in the closet while having the data, someone came in my room. Does this sound natural?
When I've held breath and hid in the closet while having the data, someone came in my room. Does this sound natural?
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I was Hiding in the closet, breathing heavily and holding the data when someone came into my room...
I was Hiding in the closet, breathing heavily and holding the data when someone came into my room...

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