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I can't forget even one second which we have it together and I remember our sad tears the last night and I remember Warm hugs from the good lovely international friends ^-^ Does this sound natural?
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You need to clean up some of the verb tenses, is it past tense or present tense? Where? Also, better punctuation and capitalization. Those are the biggest issues.
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Better. "I can't forget for even one second the time we spent together."
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And you should put a comma instead of a period after "program", because you continue the sentence with "and"
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