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Hi can you take a look at my text and telling me what is wrong? thank you ^^ (mostly grammar)
We are also favorable of a break of the strike before Christmas. The government have a week to announce the removal of his project and if he takes action that way the conflict may stop very fast. But on the other hand, that’s out of the question! A renewable strike doing a break, it doesn’t exist. Do you really imagine the loose of the striker salary at the end of twenty days will stop that way?
Hi can you take a look at my text and telling me what is wrong? thank you ^^ (mostly grammar)
We are also favorable of a break of the strike before Christmas. The government have a week to announce the removal of his project and if he takes action that way the conflict may stop very fast. But on the other hand, that’s out of the question! A renewable strike doing a break, it doesn’t exist. Do you really imagine the loose of the striker salary at the end of twenty days will stop that way?
We are also favorable of a break of the strike before Christmas. The government have a week to announce the removal of his project and if he takes action that way the conflict may stop very fast. But on the other hand, that’s out of the question! A renewable strike doing a break, it doesn’t exist. Do you really imagine the loose of the striker salary at the end of twenty days will stop that way?
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This is how I would write the paragraph.
We are also favorable of a break from the strike before Christmas. The government has a week to announce the removal of his project and if he does remove it the conflict my quickly stop. But on the other hand, that’s out of the question! Having a break during a strike is not realistic. Can you imagine the loss of the strikers salary at the end of the twenty days?
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