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Just asking to correct my writing, thanks in advance:
First of all I think TV is the worst media ever invented to learn new skills, keep our brain in shape and entertain people, even thought we still can find good things on TV such as documentaries and great movies we have to say these ones are only exceptions in an ocean of pure trash. TV news programs are designed to decieve the public and their only one purpose is to help to keep the status quo rolling every single day, it's so obvios the way they manipulate information to deliver it the way TV news owners want it to be delivered. A good example of this can be war news where every single TV news channel presents its own reality systematically hiding important facts from the public and showing only what the channel want to show. in brief, in my opinion we should take news programmes as movies loaded with fantasies and lies.
Just asking to correct my writing, thanks in advance:
First of all I think TV is the worst media ever invented to learn new skills, keep our brain in shape and entertain people, even thought we still can find good things on TV such as documentaries and great movies we have to say these ones are only exceptions in an ocean of pure trash. TV news programs are designed to decieve the public and their only one purpose is to help to keep the status quo rolling every single day, it's so obvios the way they manipulate information to deliver it the way TV news owners want it to be delivered. A good example of this can be war news where every single TV news channel presents its own reality systematically hiding important facts from the public and showing only what the channel want to show. in brief, in my opinion we should take news programmes as movies loaded with fantasies and lies.
First of all I think TV is the worst media ever invented to learn new skills, keep our brain in shape and entertain people, even thought we still can find good things on TV such as documentaries and great movies we have to say these ones are only exceptions in an ocean of pure trash. TV news programs are designed to decieve the public and their only one purpose is to help to keep the status quo rolling every single day, it's so obvios the way they manipulate information to deliver it the way TV news owners want it to be delivered. A good example of this can be war news where every single TV news channel presents its own reality systematically hiding important facts from the public and showing only what the channel want to show. in brief, in my opinion we should take news programmes as movies loaded with fantasies and lies.
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I think TV is the worst media ever invented to learn new skills, keep our brains in shape, and entertain people. Even though we still can find good things on TV such as documentaries and great movies, we have to recognize that programs like these are exceptions in an ocean of pure trash. TV news channels are designed to deceive the public, and the only thing they do is stick to the status quo every single day. It's obvious that they manipulate information and deliver it the way TV news owners want it to be delivered. A good example of this is when all the TV news channels present their own reality, systematically hiding important facts from the public and showing only what the channel wants to show. In my opinion, we should see news programs as movies filled with fantasies and lies.
Great writing, I've just added a few corrections. Let me know if you have any questions :)
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I think TV is the worst media ever invented to learn new skills, keep our brains in shape, and entertain people. Even though we still can find good things on TV such as documentaries and great movies, we have to recognize that programs like these are exceptions in an ocean of pure trash. TV news channels are designed to deceive the public, and the only thing they do is stick to the status quo every single day. It's obvious that they manipulate information and deliver it the way TV news owners want it to be delivered. A good example of this is when all the TV news channels present their own reality, systematically hiding important facts from the public and showing only what the channel wants to show. In my opinion, we should see news programs as movies filled with fantasies and lies.
Great writing, I've just added a few corrections. Let me know if you have any questions :)
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@tommy_p Thanks a lot, I really appreciate your help. :)
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@Marco8118 No problem. Your English is great. 9/10 :)
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