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Please correct my journal 🐮
I was able to get "Kiri."
Kiri wasn't at the supermarket the other day.
Every time I went to the supermarket that I was checking it whether it was there, so it was nice to get it.
After eating it, the cheese a little bit left, so I like to eat and scoop it with my index finger.
Well, it is bad manners though.
Please correct my journal 🐮
I was able to get "Kiri."
Kiri wasn't at the supermarket the other day.
Every time I went to the supermarket that I was checking it whether it was there, so it was nice to get it.
After eating it, the cheese a little bit left, so I like to eat and scoop it with my index finger.
Well, it is bad manners though.
I was able to get "Kiri."
Kiri wasn't at the supermarket the other day.
Every time I went to the supermarket that I was checking it whether it was there, so it was nice to get it.
After eating it, the cheese a little bit left, so I like to eat and scoop it with my index finger.
Well, it is bad manners though.
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Correction: Every time I went to the supermarket, I was checking whether it was there, so it was nice to get it.
After eating it, there was a little bit of cheese left, so I like to eat it by scooping it with my index finger.
The rest of the sentences are correct are natural.
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