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23 Jan 2017
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Jan 23
I was tired today.
I worked part-time from morning with having the yesterday's fatigue.
I want to take a bath and get to sleep early.
I'm sorry with a diary without contents.
I don't think my sentences flow very smoothly and there are some mistakes. Please correct anything that doesn't seem natural.
Jan 23
I was tired today.
I worked part-time from morning with having the yesterday's fatigue.
I want to take a bath and get to sleep early.
I'm sorry with a diary without contents.
I don't think my sentences flow very smoothly and there are some mistakes. Please correct anything that doesn't seem natural.
I was tired today.
I worked part-time from morning with having the yesterday's fatigue.
I want to take a bath and get to sleep early.
I'm sorry with a diary without contents.
I don't think my sentences flow very smoothly and there are some mistakes. Please correct anything that doesn't seem natural.
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"I was tired today, because I worked part-time from morning while dealing with fatigue from yesterday. Now, I want to take a bath and get to sleep early. I'm sorry for writing a diary without much content."
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@GoobyGoo is it correct to say "I was tired today?". I'm from India and I've never heard anyone say that. we say either "I'm tired today" or "I was tired this morning" or "I was tired this evening" assuming the person is ahead of morning or evening part of the day.
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@AlkaC Yes, where I'm from (California, USA), people like to complain about hard work throughout the whole school or workday. It refers to the daytime when talking at night
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@takuya111 I would write:
Jan 23rd
I was tired today.
I worked part-time in the morning while still suffering from yesterday's fatigue.
I want to take a bath and get to sleep early.
I'm sorry that this diary entry has little content.
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