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22 Dec 2020
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Question about United States
Are there any grammatical errors in this article?
Are there any grammatical errors in this article?
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- Country or region United States
“Internation” should be “international” (sentence 1)
Sentence 6 can be changed to “Besides, the Olympic Games also catalyze the local economy.”
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- Country or region United States
Sentence 7: I would say “athletes” instead of “sportsmen” and add “members” after “audience.” Also, you wouldn’t consume hotels, restaurants, or souvenirs; I would change that phrase to be “...boost the domestic economy because they would visit hotels and restaurants and buy souvenirs.”
Sentence 8: say “the Olympic Games” and “imposes”
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- Country or region United States
Sentence 9: change “government have” to “government has”
Sentence 10: replace “ameliorating” with “improving” (great word but it doesn’t work here)
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