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I want this text to be in the most formal format, so tell me how to do it please !!
I am highly interested in this great volunteer opportunity as it suits my passion for teaching children. Volunteering brings me also a deep sense of fulfillment and happiness for making a contribution, especially when my role is with children. By volunteering, I would be able to carry out a job even though I am not being paid because I can gain valuable experience of dealing with children and new skills which are likely to be useful in the future.
I want this text to be in the most formal format, so tell me how to do it please !!
I am highly interested in this great volunteer opportunity as it suits my passion for teaching children. Volunteering brings me also a deep sense of fulfillment and happiness for making a contribution, especially when my role is with children. By volunteering, I would be able to carry out a job even though I am not being paid because I can gain valuable experience of dealing with children and new skills which are likely to be useful in the future.
I am highly interested in this great volunteer opportunity as it suits my passion for teaching children. Volunteering brings me also a deep sense of fulfillment and happiness for making a contribution, especially when my role is with children. By volunteering, I would be able to carry out a job even though I am not being paid because I can gain valuable experience of dealing with children and new skills which are likely to be useful in the future.
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This great volunteering opportunity is very appealing to me as I am passionate about teaching children. Volunteering also gives me a sense of fulfillment and happiness for contributing, especially when I work with children. I can gain valuable experience in dealing with children and new skills by volunteering even though I am not being paid.
Overall, the initial paragraph that you wrote was very good. Keep up the good work!
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