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This shrine is said to be the most stylish in Japan, which designed by world-famous architect Kengo Kuma.
Even though it is a shrine, it looks like a museum with a Japanese theme. This stylish design that overturns the image of a shrine.
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This shrine is said to be the most stylish in Japan, which designed by world-famous architect Kengo Kuma.
Even though it is a shrine, it looks like a museum with a Japanese theme. This stylish design that overturns the image of a shrine.
Is this sentence correct?
Even though it is a shrine, it looks like a museum with a Japanese theme. This stylish design that overturns the image of a shrine.
Is this sentence correct?
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Your overall message is great and has good information. It just needed to be cleaned up and rearranged a bit for a more pleasant and natural flow.
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Designed by world-renowned architect, Kengo Kuma, this shrine is said to be the most stylish in Japan.
Unlike conventional shrines that share a similar image, this shrine looks more like a Japanese-themed museum.
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@brisamarina1723 I would suggest removing “which”: This shrine is said to be the most stylish in Japan, designed by the world-famous architect Kengo Kuma.
The second sentence is good although I would personally change it to “a Japanese-themed museum,” although I don’t know if that’s a little different than what you wanted to express.
Remove “that” from the third sentence.
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