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19 Apr 2021
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Is this natural? Make sense? (It's a lyrics)
I don't know even if I think about love
I don't know why I fell in love with you
Love is such an irrational, clumsy thing
Cause I can understand each other through hurting each other
I mean, ''Love is such an irrational and clumsy thing, because I can't understand each other without hurting each other.''
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Is this natural? Make sense? (It's a lyrics)
I don't know even if I think about love
I don't know why I fell in love with you
Love is such an irrational, clumsy thing
Cause I can understand each other through hurting each other
I mean, ''Love is such an irrational and clumsy thing, because I can't understand each other without hurting each other.''
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I don't know even if I think about love
I don't know why I fell in love with you
Love is such an irrational, clumsy thing
Cause I can understand each other through hurting each other
I mean, ''Love is such an irrational and clumsy thing, because I can't understand each other without hurting each other.''
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- English (US)
* sense not sence, lyrics not lylics
"I don't know why I even think about love" would be better. your original sentence is unclear.
Otherwise is good, but you do need to change the second sentence to the negative. (can't not can, without not through)
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I don't know why I even think about love
I don't know why I fell in love with you
Love is such an irrational, clumsy thing
Cause I can't understand each other without hurting each other
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