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Today I woke up at 6:00 and I got up around 6:20 then I took a shower. After that I went for a walk with my dog, we were outside about 30 minutes. When I got/arrived to my house, my sister and my mother had already gotten up, my sister was using her laptop because she has Excel classes in the morning from 8:00 to 11:00 and my mother was making breakfast while she talked on the phone. After breakfast I didn't do many things, I just studied English and Portuguese on my own for some hours and then I had lunch.
Is it correct? sounds natural?
Today I woke up at 6:00 and I got up around 6:20 then I took a shower. After that I went for a walk with my dog, we were outside about 30 minutes. When I got/arrived to my house, my sister and my mother had already gotten up, my sister was using her laptop because she has Excel classes in the morning from 8:00 to 11:00 and my mother was making breakfast while she talked on the phone. After breakfast I didn't do many things, I just studied English and Portuguese on my own for some hours and then I had lunch.
Is it correct? sounds natural?
Is it correct? sounds natural?
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@cuevaraquel707 this is a great paragraph however there are some parts that is fixed would make the whole paragraph a bit more natural
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@cuevaraquel707 today I woke up at 6:00 and got out of bed at around 6:20 then I took a shower. After that I went for a walk with my dog, we were outside for about 30 minutes. when I got to my house my sister and my mother had already gotten up, my sister was using her laptop because she has Excel classes in the morning from 8 to 11:00am
and my mother was making breakfast while she was talking on the phone. after breakfast I didn't do many things, I just studied English and Portuguese on my own for some hours and then I had lunch.
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@cuevaraquel707 for sure I just sent you your paragraph with some added parts that will help to make the paragraph more natural let me know if you have any questions about it.
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