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Q: There are many active volcanoes in Japan, right?
A: Yes. If they erupt, volcanic ash lies thick near the mountains and negatively affects human health and crops. However, geothermal power that uses volcanic heat is gathering attention as renewable energy. It will be very helpful for Japan that is relying on a lot of energy to be imported.
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Q: There are many active volcanoes in Japan, right?
A: Yes. If they erupt, volcanic ash lies thick near the mountains and negatively affects human health and crops. However, geothermal power that uses volcanic heat is gathering attention as renewable energy. It will be very helpful for Japan that is relying on a lot of energy to be imported.
Q: There are many active volcanoes in Japan, right?
A: Yes. If they erupt, volcanic ash lies thick near the mountains and negatively affects human health and crops. However, geothermal power that uses volcanic heat is gathering attention as renewable energy. It will be very helpful for Japan that is relying on a lot of energy to be imported.
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Are there many active volcanoes in Japan?
Answer: change gathering to gaining change that to who. Also it is as a renewable resource.
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Yes , there are many active volcanoes in Japan. While they are fascinating, they’re quite dangerous as well. If they erupt, volcanic ash will collect in thick dust around the mountain and negatively affect human life and the ecosystem around it. However the source this ash came from is gathering attention as a renewable energy source. This could possibly be very helpful for Japan, possibly getting the country on its own source of energy rather than importing.
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"Q: There are many active volcanoes in Japan; right?
A: Yes. If they erupt, volcanic ash lies thick near the mountains and negatively affects human health and crops. However, geothermal power that uses volcanic heat is gathering attention as potential renewable energy. It would be very helpful for Japan which relies on a lot of energy to be imported."
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"It will be very helpful for Japan that is relying on a lot of energy to be imported."
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"It will be very helpful for Japan, which relies on a lot of imported energy."
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