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听起来自然吗？请帮我修改我的作业，感谢
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我是...学校的学生...（女，2006年04月10日出生），今年上十一 年级。之所以写这份申请书是想申请到贵校的数学专业。清华是中国著名高等学府。能进清华大学，并学习我热爱的专业就是我最大的愿望。
我从小最大的理想是能去中国留学。我认为，留学能使我学会一些在国内不可获得的
人生经验：亲身见识海外的生活、体会传统文化、认识许多不同的人、并学会独立的生活。因此，能获得奖学金并申请到贵校，这样的机会是我盼望已久的。
听起来自然吗？请帮我修改我的作业，感谢
尊敬的招生部主任：
您好！
我是...学校的学生...（女，2006年04月10日出生），今年上十一 年级。之所以写这份申请书是想申请到贵校的数学专业。清华是中国著名高等学府。能进清华大学，并学习我热爱的专业就是我最大的愿望。
我从小最大的理想是能去中国留学。我认为，留学能使我学会一些在国内不可获得的
人生经验：亲身见识海外的生活、体会传统文化、认识许多不同的人、并学会独立的生活。因此，能获得奖学金并申请到贵校，这样的机会是我盼望已久的。
尊敬的招生部主任：
您好！
我是...学校的学生...（女，2006年04月10日出生），今年上十一 年级。之所以写这份申请书是想申请到贵校的数学专业。清华是中国著名高等学府。能进清华大学，并学习我热爱的专业就是我最大的愿望。
我从小最大的理想是能去中国留学。我认为，留学能使我学会一些在国内不可获得的
人生经验：亲身见识海外的生活、体会传统文化、认识许多不同的人、并学会独立的生活。因此，能获得奖学金并申请到贵校，这样的机会是我盼望已久的。
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尊敬的招生部主任：
您好！
我是...学校的学生...（女，2006年04月10日出生），今年上十一年级（高二），之所以写这份申请书是想申请贵校的数学专业。清华是中国最高等级的学府。能进清华大学，并学习我热爱的专业是我最大的愿望。
我从小最大的理想就是能去中国留学。我认为，留学可以让我学到一些在印尼国内不能获得的人生经验，比如亲身体验海外生活、体会当地的传统文化、认识许多不同的人并学会独立生活等等。因此，获得奖学金并申请到贵校学习，这样的机会是我盼望已久的。
你是华裔吗？写得挺好啊，甚至不需要我修改都没问题
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