I have a presentation to do in Native English class.
The following is the part of it.


Hell,I'm ＊＊. Now let me talk about my interview. If you have any comments,please feel free to tell me. Ok?
My interviewee's name is Sophia. I Didn't ask her age but judging from her talking, I guess she's older than me.

First of all I ask her country. Then she said me 'guess my country ',and gave me a hint that her country's language is English. But she looked like an Asian for me. So I was confused. I had no idea. Then her friend Dallas gave me another hint ,finally I found out. She is from Australia,it's been 8monthes.

Does this sound natural?