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Korean
First off, I will write about the benefits I will receive by taking this course as a means to improve my English. I have been taking English-taught classes alone since 2020, and I used to take many of them even before that, and I have known how much my English improves by taking classes conducted in English. As these courses are exclusive to those who have such high English as to pass the screening, the level of the courses should inevitably be high. Therefore, I assume I can further work hard in the class, inspired by those students. Does this sound natural?
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FirstThere off,are many reasons why I willchoose writethis aboutcourse. theFirst, benefitsthere Iare willgreat receivebenefits byfrom taking this all-English course as a meansway to improve my English.
FirstThere off,are many reasons why I willchoose writethis aboutcourse. theFirst, benefitsthere Iare willgreat receivebenefits byfrom taking this all-English course as a meansway to improve my English.
Since 2020, I have been exclusively taking English-taught classes alonetaught sincein 2020English, and I usedhad totaken take many ofclasses them even before then. From that experience, and I haveam knownreassured howthat much my Englishlanguage improvesabilities bywill takingsignificantly classesimprove from courses conducted solely in English.
Since 2020, I have been exclusively taking English-taught classes alonetaught sincein 2020English, and I usedhad totaken take many ofclasses them even before then. From that experience, and I haveam knownreassured howthat much my Englishlanguage improvesabilities bywill takingsignificantly classesimprove from courses conducted solely in English.
As these courses are exclusivelimited to those who haveshow such high English asskills toin pass the screeningtests, theit levelis ofintensive theand courses should inevitably be highrefined.
As these courses are exclusivelimited to those who haveshow such high English asskills toin pass the screeningtests, theit levelis ofintensive theand courses should inevitably be highrefined.
Therefore, I assumeexpect that I can further workadvance hardmyself in thethis class, inspiredthrough byinteractions thoseamong motivated and inspiring students.
Therefore, I assumeexpect that I can further workadvance hardmyself in thethis class, inspiredthrough byinteractions thoseamong motivated and inspiring students.
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First offof all, I will write about the benefits I will receivehave received by taking this course as a means to improve my English.
First offof all, I will write about the benefits I will receivehave received by taking this course as a means to improve my English.
I have been taking English-taught classes alone since 2020, and I used to take many of them even before that, and I have known how much my English improves by taking classes conducted in English.
As these courses are exclusive tofor those who have such high English as to pass the screening, the level of thethese courses should inevitably be high.
As these courses are exclusive tofor those who have such high English as to pass the screening, the level of thethese courses should inevitably be high.
Therefore, I assume I can further work hard in the class, inspired by those students.
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FirstThere off,are many reasons why I willchoose writethis aboutcourse. theFirst, benefitsthere Iare willgreat receivebenefits byfrom taking this all-English course as a meansway to improve my English.
FirstThere off,are many reasons why I willchoose writethis aboutcourse. theFirst, benefitsthere Iare willgreat receivebenefits byfrom taking this all-English course as a meansway to improve my English.
Since 2020, I have been exclusively taking English-taught classes alonetaught sincein 2020English, and I usedhad totaken take many ofclasses them even before then. From that experience, and I haveam knownreassured howthat much my Englishlanguage improvesabilities bywill takingsignificantly classesimprove from courses conducted solely in English.
Since 2020, I have been exclusively taking English-taught classes alonetaught sincein 2020English, and I usedhad totaken take many ofclasses them even before then. From that experience, and I haveam knownreassured howthat much my Englishlanguage improvesabilities bywill takingsignificantly classesimprove from courses conducted solely in English.
As these courses are exclusivelimited to those who haveshow such high English asskills toin pass the screeningtests, theit levelis ofintensive theand courses should inevitably be highrefined.
As these courses are exclusivelimited to those who haveshow such high English asskills toin pass the screeningtests, theit levelis ofintensive theand courses should inevitably be highrefined.
Therefore, I assumeexpect that I can further workadvance hardmyself in thethis class, inspiredthrough byinteractions thoseamong motivated and inspiring students.
Therefore, I assumeexpect that I can further workadvance hardmyself in thethis class, inspiredthrough byinteractions thoseamong motivated and inspiring students.
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