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13 October

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Is this gramatically correct? I appreciate all advice :) I'm especially unsure of where the "了" should be placed..
前天中午我发现我没有墨水了。这是一件重事,因为我当作家,所以很多写。我需要马上去百货商店买新墨水。再说我也需要买一些笔记本和一些纸。我坐了公共汽车去那儿。那时天很阴,天气不太好。我觉得,如果下雨我就要买一个伞在百货商店。这个百货商店非常大,里面有什么都用品。我最喜欢的部是文具部,难怪我常常在那儿买东西。但是我走去文具部以前,我听出来一些笑声。我转过头向笑响的地方去看一看。那个地方是一家鞋店。鞋店里有五六个人,都在笑着。中间有一个男人的,他看起来是外国人。旁边的人都是姑娘的。售货员也是姑娘的。

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