Guys, please 😊🙏🏻. Is this paragraph correct ?
"Harvey, my dog was adopted by my family a few years ago. It was a normal day of April, I was working that day but one of my partners never arrived, so the manager asked me if I could stay an hour more to support him while the next seller came, and I said him, yes. When the hour finished I went directly to home, I'm that kind of person who usually listen to music when I go to somewhere. That day wasn't different. I was almost at home , when I turned the corner I ran into a little dog, he looked very pretty but a bit dirty. I caressed his head, he smelled my shoes, and then I went...