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Can you proofread my diary?
Yesterday, I got 955 scores on my exam.
Finally I did it! I was surprised very much and I proud of myself. Thesedays, I felt an emptiness in my heart and I don't know the reason.
Anyway, that scores made me happy temporarily.
And today I went shopping at department store and bought some clothes (pants and sweater). It was cheap and I like their color. I am going to wear them for my weekends trip. Does this sound natural?
Yesterday, I got 955 scores on my exam.
Finally I did it! I was surprised very much and I proud of myself. Thesedays, I felt an emptiness in my heart and I don't know the reason.
Anyway, that scores made me happy temporarily.
And today I went shopping at department store and bought some clothes (pants and sweater). It was cheap and I like their color. I am going to wear them for my weekends trip. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
Yesterday I got a 955 score on my exam!
I finally did it! I was so surprised and proud of myself.
These days I've felt an emptiness in my heart and I don't know the reason, so the scores made me happy temporarily (you could also use 'for now').
Today I went shopping at a department store and bought some clothes (pants and sweater) that were cheap and I liked their color. I am going to wear them on my trip this weekend.
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A little unnatural
Yesterday I got a 955 score on my exam!
I finally did it! I was so surprised and proud of myself.
These days I've felt an emptiness in my heart and I don't know the reason, so the scores made me happy temporarily (you could also use 'for now').
Today I went shopping at a department store and bought some clothes (pants and sweater) that were cheap and I liked their color. I am going to wear them on my trip this weekend.
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