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17 January
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English (US)
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Hi, can I ask you if the following sentences sound natural? 🙂
(1) Please rewrite your writing with all the corrections I made included.
(2) Please rewrite your writing considering all the corrections I made.
Hi, can I ask you if the following sentences sound natural? 🙂
(1) Please rewrite your writing with all the corrections I made included.
(2) Please rewrite your writing considering all the corrections I made.
(1) Please rewrite your writing with all the corrections I made included.
(2) Please rewrite your writing considering all the corrections I made.
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- English (US)
We don't need to say writing twice in one sentence.
We can say:
Please rewrite it with all the corrections I requested.
Please do a rewrite with all the changes I noted.
Please rewrite your work with all my edits in mind.
Please rewrite your essay as per my corrections.
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- English (US)
We don't need to say writing twice in one sentence.
We can say:
Please rewrite it with all the corrections I requested.
Please do a rewrite with all the changes I noted.
Please rewrite your work with all my edits in mind.
Please rewrite your essay as per my corrections.
- Korean
@samoilovdmitry Oh, I see! Thank you very much for your help! 🙂
Can I also say
“Please rewrite it including all the corrections I requested.”
Can I also say
“Please rewrite it including all the corrections I requested.”
- English (US)
@lller yes, like this:
Please rewrite it (including all the corrections I requested).
Or
Please rewrite it with all the corrections I requested.
- Korean
@samoilovdmitry Just one more thing!
Does it sound natural to say
“Please rewrite it with all the corrections I made to it.”
Does it sound natural to say
“Please rewrite it with all the corrections I made to it.”
- English (US)
@lller it's okay.... It's not great because you say "it" twice in the sentence. Try to avoid that.
Say instead:
Please rewrite it with all the corrections I made.
Or
Please do a rewrite with all the corrections I made to it.
- Korean
@samoilovdmitry Oh, I got it! Thank you for your help!! 😌
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Or rewrite your assignment.
Look for that repetition in your writing. It's a common mistake for native speakers too. Look for how many times you say something like "write" or use a certain adjective. Also, make sure you don't start every sentence the same way. "I am a student. I am studying economics." Both are "I am" and have study (student and studying). See if you can put things together. "I am an economics student."
- Korean
@PwokYH17uHu6 Oh, thank you very much for your detailed explanation!
Could I also ask you what you’d say in a natural way with my original question? 🙂
Could I also ask you what you’d say in a natural way with my original question? 🙂
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Please rewrite your assignment using the corrections I gave you.
- Korean
@PwokYH17uHu6 Oh, I see! Thank you very much! 🙂
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