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18 January
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"The other day, Ken asked Haruka out, but she said she is seeing someone. He was so sad because he was dumped. He cried his eyes out that night. "
Hello! Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you!
"The other day, Ken asked Haruka out, but she said she is seeing someone. He was so sad because he was dumped. He cried his eyes out that night. "
Hello! Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you!
Hello! Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you!
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18 January
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- English (US)
- Italian Near fluent
"Dumped" is usually when two people are already a couple and then one breaks up with the other. "Rejected" would be a better word here! The rest looks great.
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"Dumped" is usually when two people are already a couple and then one breaks up with the other. "Rejected" would be a better word here! The rest looks great.
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@SyLambert Ahh! That makes sense! "rejected", not "dumped". Thank you. Grazie.
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