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26 June
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English (US)
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Can you fix my sentence so it sounds more natural? (I want to write in my diary.)
We went to my husband’s friend’s house to celebrate childbirth.
My husband’s friend’s baby was very very very cute. I healed by cuteness:)
Can you fix my sentence so it sounds more natural? (I want to write in my diary.)
We went to my husband’s friend’s house to celebrate childbirth.
My husband’s friend’s baby was very very very cute. I healed by cuteness:)
We went to my husband’s friend’s house to celebrate childbirth.
My husband’s friend’s baby was very very very cute. I healed by cuteness:)
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- English (US)
We went to my husband’s friend’s house to celebrate (the pronoun of the friend)’s newborn baby. My husband’s friend’s baby was very, very, very, very cute. I was healed by its cuteness
@yuki_0228182020 If you don’t understand any of the changes, feel free to ask :)
変更が分からないですが、気軽に頼みます。 :)
- Japanese
@AnimeMyth Thanks for the correction!
We went to my husband’s friend’s house to celebrate he’s newborn baby. My husband’s friend’s baby was very, very, very, very cute. I was healed by its cuteness.
Is this correct?
We went to my husband’s friend’s house to celebrate he’s newborn baby. My husband’s friend’s baby was very, very, very, very cute. I was healed by its cuteness.
Is this correct?
- English (US)
@yuki_0228182020 It would be “his”, not “he’s”. He’s is a contraction of the phrase “he is.” It wouldn’t make sense to say “he is baby.” “His” shows ownership. I can see how the way I phrased it would make you think that though. That’s my fault, sorry
- Japanese
@AnimeMyth Oh, that's right 💦 I meant to say "his" baby 💦 no, my mistake😅.
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