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Can you fix my sentence so it sounds more natural? (I want to write in my diary.)
Today was fulfilling day because I bought my favorite character’s merchandise, went cafe I wanted (I bought drip pack coffee:D),and bought a rubber stamp I thought I couldn't get.
Today was fulfilling day because I bought my favorite character’s merchandise, went cafe I wanted (I bought drip pack coffee:D),and bought a rubber stamp I thought I couldn't get.
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Today was a fulfilling day, because I bought my favorite character's merchandise, then I went to the Cafe I wanted to go to and I bought a drip pack coffee :D I also bought a rubber stamp that I thought I couldn't get :)
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@yuki_0228182020 No problem at all :)) feel free to ask more questions if needed, especially since long sentences sound more natural.
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