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Could you fix this awkward sentence??

“I think that death penalty should be abolished in Japan for the following two reasons. To begin with, death penalty dose not deterrent on crime. For example, Japan have capital punishment but still there are a lot of crime including murder. Second, some people have wish of suicide. Death penalty may be able to satisfy their desire, therefore they might cause a huge and serious incident.”

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Could you fix this awkward sentence??

“I think that death penalty should be abolished in Japan for the following two reasons. To begin with, death penalty dose not deterrent on crime. For example, Japan have capital punishment but still there are a lot of crime including murder. Second, some people have wish of suicide. Death penalty may be able to satisfy their desire, therefore they might cause a huge and serious incident.”
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