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Could you please proofread my writing and tell me if it sounds natural?
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases.
A: Not only on Vtuber industry, I think there are lots of advantages to be open about money. When a influencer or a performer work with outside of their field, they can prevent to work for inappropriate reward or anything.
B: I definitely think so. If you hide it, I'd have no idea about how the heck much income you work with at all. So,,,,,
A: You can't tell the view on normal price?
B: Yeah. I believe there is no world that you should sell your value for cheep.
Could you please proofread my writing and tell me if it sounds natural?
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases.
A: Not only on Vtuber industry, I think there are lots of advantages to be open about money. When a influencer or a performer work with outside of their field, they can prevent to work for inappropriate reward or anything.
B: I definitely think so. If you hide it, I'd have no idea about how the heck much income you work with at all. So,,,,,
A: You can't tell the view on normal price?
B: Yeah. I believe there is no world that you should sell your value for cheep.
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases.
A: Not only on Vtuber industry, I think there are lots of advantages to be open about money. When a influencer or a performer work with outside of their field, they can prevent to work for inappropriate reward or anything.
B: I definitely think so. If you hide it, I'd have no idea about how the heck much income you work with at all. So,,,,,
A: You can't tell the view on normal price?
B: Yeah. I believe there is no world that you should sell your value for cheep.
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A: Outside the Vtuber industry, I think there are lots of advantages to being open about money. When an influencer or a performer work outside of their field, they can prevent working for inappropriate rewards and things similar to that.
B: I think so. If you hide it, I'd have no idea how much income you're working with.
A: You can't tell the view on normal price?
B: Yeah, I believe there is no world where you should sell your value for cheap.
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@babybell
Thank you for your prompt reply and carefully correcting my writing.
Would you mind my asking a bit more?
In terms of " how much income you're working with.", if you emphasize "how much", how do you do that? I tried using "the heck" for now, but it seem that it didn't work well.
Thank you for your prompt reply and carefully correcting my writing.
Would you mind my asking a bit more?
In terms of " how much income you're working with.", if you emphasize "how much", how do you do that? I tried using "the heck" for now, but it seem that it didn't work well.
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