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この文を添削してほしいです。

① We went to tuxedo rentals and sales store. It’s a family run business and has been in the same location for 45 years. The woman who took a selfie with us is owner. They lend tuxedos to people who participate some special events, such as graduation ceremony.

② We found a record shop by chance. The name is 〇〇. It stood out because of the many records on the store's windowpanes. The clerks wore 60’s fashion and I was so excited to stay the space.
After we go out the shop, we encountered a man who played guitar and sang.

③ Love is invisible, but we could feel lots of love in 〇〇. Firstly, we discussed what is love, and decided to take a picture with them. They helped us take a picture, although they said they have a plan. They said that day was their 50th wedding anniversary. Seeing them so happy made us smile.

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この文を添削してほしいです。

① We went to tuxedo rentals and sales store. It’s a family run business and has been in the same location for 45 years. The woman who took a selfie with us is owner. They lend tuxedos to people who participate some special events, such as graduation ceremony. 

② We found a record shop by chance. The name is 〇〇. It stood out because of the many records on the store's windowpanes. The clerks wore 60’s fashion and I was so excited to stay the space. 
After we go out the shop, we encountered a man who played guitar and sang. 

③ Love is invisible, but we could feel lots of love in 〇〇. Firstly, we discussed what is love, and decided to take a picture with them. They helped us take a picture, although they said they have a plan. They said that day was their 50th wedding anniversary. Seeing them so happy made us smile.
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