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Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀

This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually there was a workshop for senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday.
On their first night, while she was asleep, she got a heart attack.
So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock.
How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she is not even exist anymore.
Once again I realize, everything is super unpredictable and we can’t guarantee tomorrow.
I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis.
But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be nicer to people around me and try to fully appriciate and be happy every single moment.

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Could you please fix my sentences to sound natural??🍀🍀

This morning one of my closest colleagues called me. Her voice was trembling and she was crying really hard. She said her manager died over the night. Actually  there was a workshop for senior staff at my company and they went on a trip to Jeju Island, which they departed yesterday.
On their first night, while she was asleep, she got a heart attack. 
So the next day, when her roommate tried to wake her up to get breakfast, her body was already ice cold and she couldn’t open her eyes. I was completely shocked and I’m still in shock.
 How uncertain our life is? what’s the point of life? Yesterday she was excited and went on a trip but now she is not even exist anymore.
Once again I realize, everything is super unpredictable and we can’t guarantee tomorrow.
I was deeply upset and had an existential crisis.
 But I guess, even so, life is worth it and I’m going to be nicer to people around me and try to fully appriciate and  be happy every single moment.
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