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4 Dec 2015
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I still have that scar which can never be refilled or never be replaced.. I shrill with pain and my heart wrench again for loving the hollow for so long. Does this sound natural?
I still have that scar which can never be refilled or never be replaced.. I shrill with pain and my heart wrench again for loving the hollow for so long. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
I still have the scar where that thing which can never be replaced once was.. I shrill with pain, and my heart wrenches again...
"for loving the hollow for so long." --- (what are you trying to say here?)
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