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请大家帮忙修改下面的短文，谢谢！
当我选择从事旅游体验师行业时，父母都阻止我，并跟我说这个行业没有前途。我知道父母为我担心，因为我从来没有体验过这个行业而且缺乏专业知识。但是我想证明给父母看，我的选择显然是正确的。
请大家帮忙修改下面的短文，谢谢！
当我选择从事旅游体验师行业时，父母都阻止我，并跟我说这个行业没有前途。我知道父母为我担心，因为我从来没有体验过这个行业而且缺乏专业知识。但是我想证明给父母看，我的选择显然是正确的。
当我选择从事旅游体验师行业时，父母都阻止我，并跟我说这个行业没有前途。我知道父母为我担心，因为我从来没有体验过这个行业而且缺乏专业知识。但是我想证明给父母看，我的选择显然是正确的。
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当我选择从事旅游体验师行业时，我的父母都试图阻止我，告诉我这个行业没有前途。我知道他们是为我担心，因为我从来没有接触过这个行业且缺乏专业知识，但是我想证明给我的父母看。现在看来，我的选择显然是正确的。（ps.这篇短文没有很大的问题，我能做的只有帮你修改的更通畅。希望我的回答能帮到你～
- Simplified Chinese (China)
当我选择以旅游体验师作为我的职业（成为一名旅游体验师）时，父母都阻止我，并跟我说这个行业没有前途。我知道父母为我担心是因为我从来没有涉足过这个行业，也缺乏专业知识。但是我想证明给父母看，我的选择一定是正确的。
说明：
①旅游体验师→职业（√）行业（×）。
②从事“某职业”×。例：从事医生（×），从事医务工作（√），从事医疗行业（√）。
③“体验”这个词比较轻，像“”玩一玩体验一下”这样。尝试某种工作一般不用“体验”。
④“显然”，更倾向于描述既成的事实。比如当你已经在这个行业做得很成功了的时候，就可以说“显然我当初的选择是正确的”。
（个人意见 仅供参考 非专业）
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