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这段文自然吗？
妈妈是世界上最爱我的人。小时候，有一天临时吃饭，我突然干脆想吃海鲜，不肯吃妈妈做的饭。那时，妈妈跟我说：“你暂时先吃饭，明天妈妈会给你买海鲜。” 明天妈妈真的带我去吃海鲜，吃完时我看过结账单，没想到那顿饭就那么贵。我觉得对不起妈妈， 所以我想向她说一句感谢和道歉。虽然有时候我调皮，可是妈妈总是爱我。
这段文自然吗？
妈妈是世界上最爱我的人。小时候，有一天临时吃饭，我突然干脆想吃海鲜，不肯吃妈妈做的饭。那时，妈妈跟我说：“你暂时先吃饭，明天妈妈会给你买海鲜。” 明天妈妈真的带我去吃海鲜，吃完时我看过结账单，没想到那顿饭就那么贵。我觉得对不起妈妈， 所以我想向她说一句感谢和道歉。虽然有时候我调皮，可是妈妈总是爱我。
妈妈是世界上最爱我的人。小时候，有一天临时吃饭，我突然干脆想吃海鲜，不肯吃妈妈做的饭。那时，妈妈跟我说：“你暂时先吃饭，明天妈妈会给你买海鲜。” 明天妈妈真的带我去吃海鲜，吃完时我看过结账单，没想到那顿饭就那么贵。我觉得对不起妈妈， 所以我想向她说一句感谢和道歉。虽然有时候我调皮，可是妈妈总是爱我。
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总体来说没有大问题，只需要一些小的改动
改文：妈妈是世界上最爱我的人。小时候，有一天吃饭，我突然临时想吃海鲜，不肯吃妈妈做的饭。那时，妈妈跟我说：“你暂时先吃饭，明天妈妈会给你买海鲜。” 明天妈妈真的带我去吃海鲜，吃完后我看到账单，没想到那顿饭居然那么贵。我觉得对不起妈妈， 所以我想向她说一声谢谢和对不起。虽然有时候我会调皮，可是妈妈一直都爱我。
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