And they（wild animals） have to find edible things or hunt other animals to survive. These can be risky for them. However, if animals live in zoos, they basically have no predators and can get food without any effort. Although living conditions in zoo may be a little stressful for them, the disadvantages are generally more subtle than those in the wild.

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29 Nov 2022

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And they, the wild animals, have to find something edible or hunt other animals to survive. This can be a risk for them.

(are you talking about the wild animals still or ALL the animals? I'm going to assume you are still talking about the wild animals)

However, if these animals lived in zoos, there would be no predators and obtain food with little to no effort.

Although the living conditions of a zoo would probably be stressful for them, the disadvantages are far less than living in the wild.

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