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30 Nov 2022
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However，these girls‘ desires and dreama did not wane for their thin wallet.
this is a sentence from my essay，is it correct？does it have any grammar issues or sound not natural？
However，these girls‘ desires and dreama did not wane for their thin wallet.
this is a sentence from my essay，is it correct？does it have any grammar issues or sound not natural？
this is a sentence from my essay，is it correct？does it have any grammar issues or sound not natural？
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I think you need wallets (plural) but otherwise sounds great. You're a good writer
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awww🥹thank you！I‘ve been struggling and anxious with my writing skill for a long time. Now I have a little confidence about it.You made my day！Thanks again！
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