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👇Are these English 🔴 sentences natural?
Would you please correct my assignment? The matter is urgent and a prompt reply would be appreciated.
至急、添削をお願いしたいです。課題で出されたものです。

🔴Theme: Should we go abroad to study foreign language?

 In recent years, there has been a tendency to see the opinion that studying abroad is necessary in Japanese society. For example, according to one news site, in the past in India, the government worked to develop human resources who would be involved in the IT industry so that they could speak English first. Thanks to that, most people in India now speak English. However I do not know if I can speak English just by studying abroad, and I do not know if I need to learn a foreign language. I will illustrate these reason.
 First, a foreign language can be learned at a school in own country rather than studying abroad. If you have the will to learn a foreign language, I think studying abroad is good option if you want to learn language. People who are not so interested in language like me, do not need to go out of their way to study abroad, Even if there is no foreign language if there is community of own language, it may be possible to live.
 Secondly, it is said that learning foreign languages will be useful in the future, and English and Chinese are currently the most studied languages in the world. However for instance, Japanese has honorifics, but English and Chinese do not have such a polite way of speaking. In this way, Japanese has many expressions that are not found in foreign languages, so I do not think it is necessary to study abroad to learn other languages.
 In this essay, I have ben discussed whether or not we should go abroad to study foreign language. In summerly, in learning foreign language, it is important to have a desire to learn a foreign language, but it is also important to understand the range of your limits, and that way of life will be useful in your future life. As mentioned above, I do not think it is necessary to study abroad because I can live comfortably without trying to talk to people all over the world.🔴

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テーマ;外国語を学ぶために留学は必要か

 近年では日本社会では留学が必要だという意見が所々見られている傾向だ。例えば、あるニュースサイトによるとインドでは過去にIT産業に携わる人材の育成のためにまずは英語を話せるようにしようと国が働きかけたということだ。そのおかげか、今ではインドには英語を話せる人が殆どだ。しかし私はそのような留学だけでは英語が話せるかどうか、また外国語を学ぶ必要があるか分からないという考えである。私がそう考える理由は3つある。次にこれらの理由を説明する。
 最初に、外国語は留学でなくて自分の国の学校で学べるものである。外国語を学びたい意思があれば留学の選択肢もいいのではと思う。私のように外国語にそれほど関心がない人はわざわざ留学に行く必要はないでしょう。外国語なしでも自らの言語のコミュニティがあれば生きていくことができるのではないだろうか。
 二つ目に、外国語の学習は将来、役に立つのは当たり前と言われており、現在は英語と中国語が世界で一番学習されている言語である。しかしながら例えば、 敬語は日本語にはあるが、英語や中国語にはそれほど丁寧な話し方がない。このように日本語は外国語にない表現が多くあることから他の言語を学びに留学は必要はないと考える。
 今回のエッセイでは、英語を勉強するには海外に行くかどうか議論してきた。まとめると、外国語学習は、外国語を学習したい気持ちも大事だが自分の限界の範囲も把握しておくことが大事であり、その生き方が今後の人生に役に立つだろう。以上のように、世界中の人と無理に会話しようとしなくても生活ができ困ることはないので留学に行く必要はないと考える。
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👇Are these English 🔴 sentences natural?
Would you please correct my assignment? The matter is urgent and a prompt reply would be appreciated.
至急、添削をお願いしたいです。課題で出されたものです。

🔴Theme: Should we go abroad to study foreign language?

 In recent years, there has been a tendency to see the opinion that studying abroad is necessary in Japanese society. For example, according to one news site, in the past in India, the government worked to develop human resources who would be involved in the IT industry so that they could speak English first. Thanks to that, most people in India now speak English. However I do not know if I can speak English just by studying abroad, and I do not know if I need to learn a foreign language. I will illustrate these reason. 
 First, a foreign language can be learned at a school in own country rather than studying abroad. If you have the will to learn a foreign language, I think studying abroad is good option if you want to learn language. People who are not so interested in language like me, do not need to go out of their way to study abroad, Even if there is no foreign language if there is community of own language, it may be possible to live. 
 Secondly, it is said that learning foreign languages will be useful in the future, and English and Chinese are currently the most studied languages in the world. However for instance, Japanese has honorifics, but English and Chinese do not have such a polite way of speaking. In this way, Japanese has many expressions that are not found in foreign languages, so I do not think it is necessary to study abroad to learn other languages. 
 In this essay, I have ben discussed whether or not we should go abroad to study foreign language. In summerly, in learning foreign language, it is important to have a desire to learn a foreign language, but it is also important to understand the range of your limits, and that way of life will be useful in your future life. As mentioned above, I do not think it is necessary to study abroad because I can live comfortably without trying to talk to people all over the world.🔴
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