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From the good old days, sport was a crucial part of human life. With the help of sport, we can stay in a good mood, improve our well-being, increase strength, grow muscles, relieve stress, and so on. Back in 2000 BC, a physical activity that we call "sport" nowadays was born in Ancient China. The main point of sport was to compete with other athletes, encourage a healthy lifestyle among ordinary people, entertain the public, and get glory. Today every man has access to engaging in some kind of sport, and its vast diversity, from simple walking to different disciplines of Olympic sports, allows us to do what we really like. For example, in my school students have PE classes several times per week, where they usually do some warm-up exercises in the beginning, and then play team sports like volleyball, and basketball, if it's not cold outside also football, etc. But in my opinion, that's actually not enough compared with how much time they sit at their desks. I'd implement a more efficient study program, which cares about pupils' health, with an increased amount of PE classes and small 5-minutes breaks for physical exercises.
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