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7 Dec 2022
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Question about French (France)
Please correct these/comment if they sound natural:
1. Il part Tesco triste en tenant les fleurs dans sa bouche.
2. Mais qui est-ce gu'il trouve dehors le magasin? C'est le caniche!
3. Il court vers elle et lui offre les fleurs. Elle dit "merci" et sourit. Ils vivent tous les deux heureux pour toujours.
La fin
Please correct these/comment if they sound natural:
1. Il part Tesco triste en tenant les fleurs dans sa bouche.
2. Mais qui est-ce gu'il trouve dehors le magasin? C'est le caniche!
3. Il court vers elle et lui offre les fleurs. Elle dit "merci" et sourit. Ils vivent tous les deux heureux pour toujours.
La fin
1. Il part Tesco triste en tenant les fleurs dans sa bouche.
2. Mais qui est-ce gu'il trouve dehors le magasin? C'est le caniche!
3. Il court vers elle et lui offre les fleurs. Elle dit "merci" et sourit. Ils vivent tous les deux heureux pour toujours.
La fin
1. He leaves Tesco feeling sad, holding the flowers in his mouth.
2. But who is this he finds outside the shop? It's the poodle!
3. He runs to her and gives her the flowers. She says "thank you" and smiles. They both live happily ever after.
The end
2. But who is this he finds outside the shop? It's the poodle!
3. He runs to her and gives her the flowers. She says "thank you" and smiles. They both live happily ever after.
The end
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- French (France)
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1. Il *quitte* Tesco ça fait plus naturel si tu veux garder il part il faut rajouter de mais c’est pas dans la phrase en anglais
*en se sentant* triste
2. C’est bon corrige le gu c’est qu faute de clavier je suppose 😉
3. *donne* les fleurs
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Pardon de m'immiscer mais "dehors le magasin" ne se dit pas : "à l'extérieur du magasin" ou "en dehors du magasin".
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@Coralinee ! Je me suis demandée pourquoi tu ne l'avais pas fait. En tout cas, je corrige comme si c'était pour moi, parce que j'aimerais qu'on corrige les erreurs de langage que je peux faire, même si ce n'est pas la demande de départ.
Belle soirée !
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@Coralinee J'avais écrit HaHa aussi en début de réponse, mais ça a disparu ... Merci pour la bonne ambiance, en tout cas !
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