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8 Dec 2022
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Simplified Chinese (China)
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Could you give me a score from 1-30 and correct the sentence ? It’s HSK5 writing
词汇 : 公司 开会 紧张 热情 材料
秋天的一个下午，一所公司马上就要开会了。公司的人员都热情地准备会议的材料。
他们的老板开会时很容易发脾气，因此，大家都非常紧张。
会议结束了，他们感觉轻松多了。下班后就回家休息休息。
Could you give me a score from 1-30 and correct the sentence ? It’s HSK5 writing
词汇 : 公司 开会 紧张 热情 材料
秋天的一个下午，一所公司马上就要开会了。公司的人员都热情地准备会议的材料。
他们的老板开会时很容易发脾气，因此，大家都非常紧张。
会议结束了，他们感觉轻松多了。下班后就回家休息休息。
词汇 : 公司 开会 紧张 热情 材料
秋天的一个下午，一所公司马上就要开会了。公司的人员都热情地准备会议的材料。
他们的老板开会时很容易发脾气，因此，大家都非常紧张。
会议结束了，他们感觉轻松多了。下班后就回家休息休息。
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You really did a good job! Maybe you can refine it in this way:
一个秋日的下午，一所公司马上就要开会了。公司的员工们都热情地准备会议材料。
他们的老板很容易在开会时发脾气。因此，员工们都非常紧张。
幸运的事，会议顺利结束。员工们感觉轻松多了。下班后，他们高兴地回家休息了。
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