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8 Dec 2022
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Could you please proofread my writing and tell me if it sounds natural?
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases and spoken language.
When I think about that I'm replying to our viewer's comments now like Vtubers who I've watched did, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers.
Could you please proofread my writing and tell me if it sounds natural?
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases and spoken language.
When I think about that I'm replying to our viewer's comments now like Vtubers who I've watched did, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers.
I would appreciate it if you could correct it using common phrases and spoken language.
When I think about that I'm replying to our viewer's comments now like Vtubers who I've watched did, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers.
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- English (US)
When I think about it, I’m replying to our viewer’s comments just like the Vtubers who I’ve watched have done. (Sentence break or semicolon here)
It’s really fun to be taking part in this movement of VTubers. (This sentence is good.)
- Japanese
@Link_Sparrow
Thank you for your prompt reply and carefully correcting my writing.
Then, I feel bad that I couldn't reply quickly.
In terms of “When I think about it,", does "it" mean "I'm replying ~ have done"?
Thank you for your prompt reply and carefully correcting my writing.
Then, I feel bad that I couldn't reply quickly.
In terms of “When I think about it,", does "it" mean "I'm replying ~ have done"?
- English (US)
- Japanese
@Link_Sparrow
I see. Would you think using these expression "Considering ~", "GIven ~" or Thinking about ~" is not appropriate in this context?
I see. Would you think using these expression "Considering ~", "GIven ~" or Thinking about ~" is not appropriate in this context?
- English (US)
- Japanese
@Link_Sparrow
I mean, like these.
"Considering that I'm replying to our viewer's comments just like Vtubers who I've watched have done, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
"GIven that I'm replying to our viewer's comments just like Vtubers who I've watched have done, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
"Thinking about that I'm replying to our viewer's comments just like Vtubers who I've watched have done, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
I mean, like these.
"Considering that I'm replying to our viewer's comments just like Vtubers who I've watched have done, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
"GIven that I'm replying to our viewer's comments just like Vtubers who I've watched have done, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
"Thinking about that I'm replying to our viewer's comments just like Vtubers who I've watched have done, it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
- English (US)
@shiosai23 They’re valid statements, but they don’t convey the same thing as the original.
In the original, it conveys the sudden realization you had of doing the same things the tubers you watched.
The others focus more on vtube being fun and less emphasis on the realization that you are doing things just like other vtubers.
- Japanese
@Link_Sparrow
I see. I got it.
I tried rewriting a little bit like this.
"When I think about the fact that I'm replying to our viewer's comments like Vtubers who I've watched have done, I feel that it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
I suppose your writing is more spoken language than this sentence, but is this equivalent of your writing semantically?
I see. I got it.
I tried rewriting a little bit like this.
"When I think about the fact that I'm replying to our viewer's comments like Vtubers who I've watched have done, I feel that it's really fun to be taking part in this movement of Vtubers."
I suppose your writing is more spoken language than this sentence, but is this equivalent of your writing semantically?
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