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Hannibal: "Hey Dexter, did you hear?
Jessica Fletcher is moving in upstairs."
Dexter: "What?! No way! I thought she was moving to the city?"
Hannibal: "Well, she changed her mind apparently. She's going to be our neighbor now."
Dexter: "That's great! We can finally get to know her better. I've been wanting to ask her out for ages."
Hannibal: "Oh yeah? Well, I've been wanting to do the same. She's the prettiest girl I've ever seen."
Dexter: "What? No way, I saw her first. I'm gonna ask her out before you do."
Hannibal: "Hey, don't be so sure. I have a good feeling about this. She might like me better."
Dexter: "No way, she's going to like me better. She's going to be my girlfriend."
If you would be so kind as to correct it, I would greatly appreciate it.🙏
Hannibal: "Hey Dexter, did you hear?
Jessica Fletcher is moving in upstairs."
Dexter: "What?! No way! I thought she was moving to the city?"
Hannibal: "Well, she changed her mind apparently. She's going to be our neighbor now."
Dexter: "That's great! We can finally get to know her better. I've been wanting to ask her out for ages."
Hannibal: "Oh yeah? Well, I've been wanting to do the same. She's the prettiest girl I've ever seen."
Dexter: "What? No way, I saw her first. I'm gonna ask her out before you do."
Hannibal: "Hey, don't be so sure. I have a good feeling about this. She might like me better."
Dexter: "No way, she's going to like me better. She's going to be my girlfriend."
If you would be so kind as to correct it, I would greatly appreciate it.🙏
Jessica Fletcher is moving in upstairs."
Dexter: "What?! No way! I thought she was moving to the city?"
Hannibal: "Well, she changed her mind apparently. She's going to be our neighbor now."
Dexter: "That's great! We can finally get to know her better. I've been wanting to ask her out for ages."
Hannibal: "Oh yeah? Well, I've been wanting to do the same. She's the prettiest girl I've ever seen."
Dexter: "What? No way, I saw her first. I'm gonna ask her out before you do."
Hannibal: "Hey, don't be so sure. I have a good feeling about this. She might like me better."
Dexter: "No way, she's going to like me better. She's going to be my girlfriend."
If you would be so kind as to correct it, I would greatly appreciate it.🙏
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9 Dec 2022
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@TadCox
Read it twice.
I don't see any errors. :)
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