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28 January
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"My parents did everything to make sure that I could live in a safe comfortable environment. I'd like to reciprocate by working hard to become a person who makes them proud."
Hello! Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you.
"My parents did everything to make sure that I could live in a safe comfortable environment. I'd like to reciprocate by working hard to become a person who makes them proud."
Hello! Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you.
Hello! Do you think the sentences above sound natural? Thank you.
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28 January
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Only thing I would do is add "and" in between safe and comfortable, other than that it sounds great
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Only thing I would do is add "and" in between safe and comfortable, other than that it sounds great
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