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31 Jan 2023
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这句话有什么语法问题(是病句):
他把那面大镜子摆好在客厅的中央。
这句话有什么语法问题(是病句):
他把那面大镜子摆好在客厅的中央。
他把那面大镜子摆好在客厅的中央。
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句式杂糅。
可以改为:
①他把那面大镜子摆在客厅中央。
②他把那面大镜子摆好 。
③那面大镜子在客厅的中央。
建议改为①,因为②③信息丢失太多。
把②③两句融合不加以删减就成上面的那句病句了,这种病句类型叫句式杂糅——将超过一句、有着相同主语及宾语的 或意思相近但不同的句子强行写成一句。
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句式杂则哦,一般中国的中高考都会考到的,改为“他把那面大镜子摆在客厅中央”就行了。
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