Hi does this make sense?

The symptom of glaucoma depends on the type and stage of the condition. For open angle-glaucoma, there are no symptoms in early stages, but gradually blind spots in side vision. The side vision is called “peripheral vision.” In later stages, it is hard to see things in central vision. For acute angle-closure glaucoma, there are severe headache, severe eye pain, nausea, vomiting, blurred vision, halos or colored rings around lights, and eye redness. For normal-tension glaucoma, there are no symptoms in early stages. There is loss of side vision in later stages. For glaucoma in children, infants can get a dull or cloudy eye, increased blinking, and tears without crying

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The symptom of glaucoma depends on the type and stage of the condition. For open angle-glaucoma, there are no symptoms in early stages, but [blind spots will gradually develop in one's "side vision."] (put "side vision" in quotes because the term typically used is peripheral vision. I see that you explain it in the next sentence)

[One's "side vision"] is called “peripheral vision.” In later stages, it is hard to see things in [one's] central vision. For acute angle-closure glaucoma, [one may experience] severe headache[s], severe eye pain, nausea, vomiting, blurred vision, halos or colored rings around lights, and eye redness. For normal-tension glaucoma, there are no symptoms in early stages. [One will lose their peripheral] vision in later stages. For glaucoma in children, infants can [develop] a dull or cloudy eye, [experience] increased blinking, and [get] tears without crying.

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