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yuu6

4 February

Japanese

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The word “freedom” has faded as a concept because over many years it completely wore down in my hoped dream.

Does my passage grammatically make sense??😊😂
If not, could you please correct it??😉😭

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threetoed

4 February

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@yuu6 The word "freedom" has faded as a concept for me. Over the years it has been completely worn down to nothing in my hopes and dreams.

I'm only kind of guessing what the last part meant because it's worded in a confusing way

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threetoed

4 February

English (US)

@yuu6 The word "freedom" has faded as a concept for me. Over the years it has been completely worn down to nothing in my hopes and dreams.

I'm only kind of guessing what the last part meant because it's worded in a confusing way

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yuu6

5 February

Japanese

@threetoed
Oh, I understand!!😭✨✨✨

Thank you very much for your helpful correction!!😊♪♪♪

yuu6

5 February

Japanese

@threetoed
Oh, can I ask you one more question??😊

"dream in which I hoped for freedom"

Does this phrase grammatically make sense??😉😭

threetoed

6 February

English (US)

@yuu6 it is a sentence fragment.

"I had a dream in which I hoped for freedom" would be a complete sentence

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yuu6

7 February

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@threetoed

Oh, I understand!!😭✨✨✨

Thank you very much for your helpful correction!!😊♪♪♪

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The word “freedom” has faded as a concept because over many years it completely wore down in my hoped dream.

Does my passage grammatically make sense??😊😂
If not, could you please correct it??😉😭

The word “freedom” has faded as a concept because over many years it completely wore down in my hoped dream. Does my passage grammatically make sense??😊😂If not, could you please correct it??😉😭 See a translation

@yuu6 The word "freedom" has faded as a concept for me. Over the years it has been completely worn down to nothing in my hopes and dreams.I'm only kind of guessing what the last part meant because it's worded in a confusing way

@yuu6 The word "freedom" has faded as a concept for me. Over the years it has been completely worn down to nothing in my hopes and dreams.I'm only kind of guessing what the last part meant because it's worded in a confusing way

@yuu6 it is a sentence fragment."I had a dream in which I hoped for freedom" would be a complete sentence

The word “freedom” has faded as a concept because over many years it completely wore down in my hoped dream.

Does my passage grammatically make sense??😊😂
If not, could you please correct it??😉😭

@yuu6 The word "freedom" has faded as a concept for me. Over the years it has been completely worn down to nothing in my hopes and dreams.

I'm only kind of guessing what the last part meant because it's worded in a confusing way

@yuu6 The word "freedom" has faded as a concept for me. Over the years it has been completely worn down to nothing in my hopes and dreams.

I'm only kind of guessing what the last part meant because it's worded in a confusing way

@yuu6 it is a sentence fragment.

"I had a dream in which I hoped for freedom" would be a complete sentence