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Could anyone check my journal entry?
I cut my daughter’s hair. She hadn't had her hair cut yet since she was born. It was heartbreaking to cut her hair, but she looked lovely with short hair.
Could anyone check my journal entry?
I cut my daughter’s hair. She hadn't had her hair cut yet since she was born. It was heartbreaking to cut her hair, but she looked lovely with short hair.
I cut my daughter’s hair. She hadn't had her hair cut yet since she was born. It was heartbreaking to cut her hair, but she looked lovely with short hair.
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I cut my daughter’s hair. She hadn't had her hair cut since she was born. It was heartbreaking to cut her hair, but she looked lovely with her short hair.
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Just one correction. I'd say, "It was heartbreaking to have cut her hair..." (perfect infinitive) = it was heartbreaking that I had cut her hair (or ... that her hair had been cut).

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